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Before After
Microwave: Take container out of box, removing lid, and placing container in the center of a microwave oven. Use high heat for 1 minute (increase to 2 minutes if taken out of freezer), take out and stir, placing in microwave for 20 seconds on high heat. If necessary, continue heating at 15 second intervals as needed to thoroughly melt fondue until liquid without burning. Be careful. Microwave instructions: Take container out of box. Remove lid. Place container in center of microwave oven. Microwave on high heat for one minute (two minutes if fondue is frozen). Remove container from microwave oven and stir. Re-heat for 15-second intervals, as needed, to thoroughly melt fondue until liquid. (Be careful, as fondue may be hot.)
 
Project
Chocolate Fondue packaging copy
Client
Venus Sweets
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